How can I make my experience of working in a retail store relevant to doing a Psychology (or any) degree?

example:

On top of my A levels and hobbies ^{this shows you can handle multiple things at once, which is a valuble skill at university}, I have also worked part-time at a fast-food restaurant for more than a year ^commitment I have learned how to prioritise^{important skill at uni and life} my school related duties to the best of my abilities, work under pressure^same as well as communicate with a range of different people^{relevant to career} throughout my time in the work environment. In a career which deals with people ^sameand their behaviour every day, I believe communication is key^confidence, which is why my part-time job has been such a great help not only for a degree but also for a career ^{show passion and future goals} in Psychology. 

can you think of 2 ways this paragraph could be improved? e.g. making it more concise