Developing points, expressing simplicity and keeping to the title

Sociology's a really wide subject to narrow into a certain question to help everyone. Content wise, it's normally not too bad. Find a study, express the study and include it into the point. Bringing it all together it's the difficulty alot of people struggle with, however. It normally goes either way. Express the most narrowest of explanation into a point bringing little depth or conversation to the essay and getting alright marks. Or, going off on a tangent and completely missing the point of the question but bringing great depth & conversation but getting bad marks.

With this, I've been in both of these situations. I can help you focus you're work around the syllables, find resources, get the most from past papers and most importently, focus on your essay writing skills to use across the board and getting highly maintained marks.