How do I convince the admissions team that I am passionate about the degree I am applying for?

There are several ways to do this. The best way by far is to demonstrate a specific nugget of interest and knowledge within the (usually) vast field of study you are applying for. So, for example, instead of saying how 'you love English literature', you can say 'the recent resurgence of the supernatural in contemporary literary fiction has really caught my interest' or 'I particularly enjoy Donne's elegies because of their affective sophistication' instead of saying I like Renaissance poetry. The more detail, specificity and depth you can demonstrate, the more effective and interesting your application will be.

DT
Answered by Dipsikha T. Personal Statements tutor

2515 Views

See similar Personal Statements Mentoring tutors

Related Personal Statements Mentoring answers

All answers ▸

I have so much to mention in my personal statement but not enough characters - how do I know what is most important?


I only recently decided to study my chosen subject, what can I do to show my enthusiasm on my personal statement?


How do I write a personal statement?


How do I write a personal statement that stands out from the crowd?


We're here to help

contact us iconContact ustelephone icon+44 (0) 203 773 6020
Facebook logoInstagram logoLinkedIn logo

MyTutor is part of the IXL family of brands:

© 2026 by IXL Learning